Thursday 18 May 2017

A Moment in Time


I have been learning  to use strategies  to add detail  to my writing.  wrote about  a moment in time  during my holiday .  I use my 5 senses to add detail to my writing. i got a lot better at my writing  the best part of it was that my favourite competitor won my next step is use 3 adjectives in a row.

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