Wednesday, 24 August 2016

walt add detail about a character

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i feel proud because i love working. next time i need to write more story into it.

Tuesday, 16 August 2016

WALT add descriptive language through or senses

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REFLECTION I used my senses (see touch, feel, taste and hear) to add detail to my writing. I feel proud because my story is interesting. Next time I will put my writing in

Dad and the bike race


Dad and the Bike Race
By Jill Eggleton

W.a.l.t talk about the plot of the story.

Main Characters
Setting
Dad, the kids
In the park

In the beginning..on Friday the kids looked in the paper and they saw a sign saying ‘Bike race on Saturday come and have a fun day. On Saturday the kids put the bikes in the truck Dad put his bike in the truck too. Dad and the kids got to the park. They took the bikes of the truck. The kids put on their helmet. Dad put on his helmet, too.



Problems
Solutions
a girl was under a tree she had no chain dad said you can have my chaindad had no seat or chain to ride on or to sit on dad ran to the finish line





In the end...is that your dad he is cool he is really cool he gave me his chain he gave me his seat

REFLECTION:
I really like that he gave his chain to the boy. i foundtyping really tricky. Next time I want to add more detail to my answers.




Monday, 15 August 2016

WALT solve three times problems

Reflection.

How I solved it I was skip counting.

How I felt I felt happy.

I felt excited.

I found it tricky.