Monday, 30 May 2016

once there wan an old man who didn't like the stuff from the garden on monday kataye aks the mean witch if she can help her but she didn't go down to the house but she did give her some seeds it grew a big tree that can make pumpkin writing am learning to add detail i feel proud because i can  wnite intereshing stories i need to improve on capital letters and full stops.

1 comment:

Bridget Platt said...

Good effort to add more detail to your story. Keep proofreading carefully. Mrs Platt and Mrs Robertson.